Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Lewis vs. Clark

Both men were hard muscled and six feet tall. Captain clark was a better boats men than Captain Lewis. Captain Lewis was a better navigator than Captain Clark. Captain Clark was a better map maker than Captain Lewis. Captain Lewis was a better botanist and biologist. Captain Clark took comfort in the company of men, talked easily with them, and enjoyed a good laugh. Captain Lewis was partial to solitude, a man of few words, but there was strength in those long silences. What one lacked the other had. The tribe had two chiefs but they would lead as one. 

7 comments:

  1. Well done, Christian and a good idea to do Lewis vs. Clark. I think you could make this sound more realistic by changing was to is. It would make your journal sound more like you are there.

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  2. I like how you color-coded for the diff. people, and how they were the same.

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  3. are of is instedd of were and was. otherwize very cool

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  4. i like the colors! easy to differentiate

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  5. Very cool addition of music. Well chosen. I think there are some Indians just up the river waiting to meet us this week.

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