Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Lewis vs. Clark

Both men were hard muscled and six feet tall. Captain clark was a better boats men than Captain Lewis. Captain Lewis was a better navigator than Captain Clark. Captain Clark was a better map maker than Captain Lewis. Captain Lewis was a better botanist and biologist. Captain Clark took comfort in the company of men, talked easily with them, and enjoyed a good laugh. Captain Lewis was partial to solitude, a man of few words, but there was strength in those long silences. What one lacked the other had. The tribe had two chiefs but they would lead as one. 

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7 comments:

  1. John SBApril 10, 2009 at 10:22 AM

    Well done, Christian and a good idea to do Lewis vs. Clark. I think you could make this sound more realistic by changing was to is. It would make your journal sound more like you are there.

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  2. ChuckApril 10, 2009 at 10:23 AM

    I like how you color-coded for the diff. people, and how they were the same.

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  3. Sir RolyatApril 10, 2009 at 10:24 AM

    are of is instedd of were and was. otherwize very cool

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  4. MarandahApril 10, 2009 at 10:26 AM

    i like the colors! easy to differentiate

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  5. maryApril 10, 2009 at 10:31 AM

    very color coded
    good job!

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  6. danielsonApril 10, 2009 at 10:31 AM

    I really like it!!!!!

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  7. John SBApril 12, 2009 at 2:56 PM

    Very cool addition of music. Well chosen. I think there are some Indians just up the river waiting to meet us this week.

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